Twelve-year-old Angel has adjusted to her mother's remarriage and believes that she and her younger brother Rags now live in the perfect family, until she discovers that her mother is going to have another baby.
Archie's complaints about his piano lessons cutting into his playtime subside when his schoolteacher presents the opportunity for Archie to become a star.
Delves into the 29 writing pitfalls most likely to turn off an editor; each is illustrated with examples, followed by solid instruction in how to correct the problem.